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Nov. 12th, 2006

Jane

Two down, three to go!

"Keep alert, stand firm in your faith,be courageous, be strong.  Let all that you do be done in love." 1 Corinthians 16.13

Well, dear friends, this is it. I have spent all day working on this paper, and though it's not done yet, I wanted to share what I have so far. Any suggestions regarding tone or organization or... well, really anything would be greatly appreciated. This has been very difficult for me to write, as I'm sure you can understand, and I think right now I've spent so much time wallowing in it that I can't see the forest for the trees anymore. It's addressed to the Sesssion of my old church, First Presbyterian Church of Brighton, Colorado (hence the letter format and the use of first person).  I hope you have some time on your hands, because it's currently about 6 pages long.

And so, without further ado, I give you... *drumroll*
my essay! )
Just a few notes: clearly, I'm not done with the citations--hence all the things that say (citation) at the end.  And it needs some massive editing.  I still have to decide how many concessions I want to make to their liberal views, and how many of them I want to attack.  Not to mention sticking in some other sources so that I meet the stupid quota for how many freaking sources I'm supposed to have (12?!).  But that will wait until later.  Right now, I'm just so relieved to have it done that I couldn't wait to share it! ^_^  I finished one of the Lit Crit papers, too, which is exciting even though it's only a page and a half.  But that one's not worth sharing.  Besides, I have to go back and write more!

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